The problem
Fixing sentences before fixing structure. Line editing a section that should be cut, moved or merged wastes everyone's time. Structure first, sentences last.
Research writing is hard because it has to do several things at once. It must be precise enough for specialists, clear enough for reviewers outside the field, and short enough to fit a word limit set by someone else. It must report uncertainty without sounding unsure of everything.
Most drafts that struggle are not badly written line by line. The problem is usually structural: the main finding arrives late, the introduction argues for a different paper, or the discussion repeats the results instead of interpreting them. Authors are too close to the work to see it, and colleagues are too busy to say so.
Then there are the documents nobody trained you to write: the white paper for a funder, the report for a board, the plain-language summary for participants, and the letter answering reviewer comments you think are wrong.
Most journals expect some version of this structure. When a draft feels hard to follow, the cause is often that material sits in the wrong part of the shape, so we look there before editing sentences.
Who this is for
- Researchers preparing a manuscript for submission, especially a first paper or a paper in a new field.
- Authors writing in English as an additional language who want their argument to land as intended.
- Nonprofits and organizations turning research or evaluation results into reports and white papers.
- Anyone facing a major revision and a long list of reviewer comments.
What we do
Structural editing looks at the argument and organization of the whole document. Line editing works sentence by sentence on clarity, flow and tone. Copyediting checks consistency, grammar and style rules.
- Manuscripts. From outline to submission: framing the contribution, organizing sections, tightening the discussion, and checking that the abstract says what the paper shows.
- Reports and white papers. Documents for funders, boards, partners and policy audiences, built around the decision the reader faces.
- Plain-language summaries. Accurate summaries for participants, the public or non-specialist stakeholders, without hype or false certainty.
- Structural editing. A close read of the whole document with a written diagnosis and a revision plan, before any sentence-level work.
- Line editing. Sentence-level edits for clarity, concision and consistency, with tracked changes and comments explaining the larger ones.
- Response-to-reviewer letters. A point-by-point response that is courteous, specific, and makes every change easy for the editor to find.
How it works
A good response letter quotes each comment, says what was changed, and gives the page and line where the change can be found. Where you disagree, explain why with evidence, and still show that you took the point seriously.
Discovery conversation
We talk about the document, its audience, where it will be submitted or sent, and what feels wrong with the current draft.
Written scope
A proposal stating the level of editing, the number of rounds, and what you will receive.
Diagnosis
For most documents we begin with a structural read and a short memo, so we agree on the big changes before the detailed ones.
Editing rounds
Tracked edits and comments in your preferred format, with a call where it helps to talk through larger changes.
Final check and handover
A last read for consistency, a check against the target journal or format, and a clean copy alongside the tracked version.
What you receive
- A structural memo with a prioritized revision plan.
- Tracked edits and explanatory comments on the full document.
- A clean, formatted version ready for submission or circulation.
- A plain-language summary, when included in scope.
- A draft response-to-reviewer letter, for revisions.
How we can work together
- Project
- One document, from diagnosis to final copy, at an agreed level of editing.
- Retainer
- Regular writing support for a lab or organization that produces papers and reports through the year.
- Hourly review
- A quick, candid read of a draft, an abstract or a response letter, with written comments.
Timelines
Timelines depend on scope: the length of the document, the level of editing, and how many rounds of revision are planned. Typical ranges are agreed in the proposal, and revision deadlines set by a journal are built into the schedule from the start.
Questions
No. We may question whether a conclusion follows from the results, and suggest wording that matches the evidence more closely, but the science and the claims remain yours.
Practices differ. Many journals ask authors to acknowledge substantial writing or editing assistance. Check the current policy of your target journal; we are happy to provide wording for an acknowledgment.
Clear writing principles apply across fields, and we read carefully for meaning. For highly specialized content, we will ask questions rather than guess, and flag anything we are not in a position to judge.
Not without your agreement, and never with unpublished material in tools that might retain it. If AI assistance would help a task, we will explain how and agree it with you first.
Yes. We read the decision and reviews with you, decide whether to revise for the same journal or retarget, and plan the changes that matter most.
